Monday 28 May 2018

Collier's Creek: 3 - Caution and Curiosity by Annabel Howarth

After about another quarter of a mile, or so, we approached the scene of the circling vultures with caution, Hannah having reined back Daisy-May to a walking pace and Billy slowing to her side. Soon, we could see a dark heap on the ground ahead. I kinda hoped it would prove to be the fallen mass of a longhorn, partly because I hadn't eaten since breakfast, but mostly because of the way Hannah said with such certainty "someone's in trouble". Like she knew that it was a person, rather than an animal in danger, before we could even see what was ahead. The way she'd tilted her head back, inhaling deeply, like she could smell it, had unnerved me.  I could now see the body. It was no cow. It was much smaller.

"Whoa, Daisy-May," Hannah cried, pulling right back on the reins and leaping out of the wagon before it had fully stopped. She ran with an unexpected speed toward the body on the ground. She seemed panicked, rather than excited now. I stayed back, frozen with astonishment, as, with her slight frame, she knelt down and heaved up the body, twice her size, and carried it back toward the wagon.
"Can't one of you git your asses over here, and help me?" she screamed. "It's Hank!"

I started, but Billy was down off his horse before me, running towards Hannah. I watched as his body buckled slightly, as the dead weight was passed to him. He staggered back to the wagon and rolled the body into the back.

Hannah jumped into the back too, rolling Hank onto his back and lowering her head over his face.
"He's breathing...just...Hey Slick, make yourself useful and pass me that canteen over," Hannah shouted to me.
"Not so quaint now," I thought. 
She looked real mad, as I glanced back after scrabbling around to no avail. 
"It's here," bellowed Billy, gruffly, as he snatched up the canteen from right beside me.
"Here you go, Miss Hannah."
"Thanks, Billy."
In between talking to Billy, Hannah spoke gently to Hank, in a way inaudible to me, as she leaned over him, dripping water onto his sun scorched lips and face.
"You know, when I first saw Hank there, I thought, hell, he's a gonner for sure...but if we can get him to Aunt Margaret's real quick, I think he could make it."
Every so often, Hank moaned a little.
"I could really do with your help, Billy. Hank is dehydrated, and.."
"But, surely we're better heading back to Collier's Creek?" Billy protested, "it's closer, and I don't like our chances heading into that..."
"No Billy, we need Aunt Margaret, she'll know what to do with this!"
Hannah pointed towards Hank's leg and it was then that I noticed the wound across Hank's thigh, like four claws had dragged down his leg, ripping through his pants and into the flesh. I noted, that there wasn't much blood.
"Please Billy," Hannah looked up at him, imploringly. I was as surprised by her vulnerability as I had been by her strength, moments before. 
"Okay Hannah, I guess I will have to come. This city slicker ain't gonna be any use to you, if you come up on more trouble." Then he laughed. "I guess you got your wish at last. All this time you've been trying to get me up to your Aunt's place. Hell, there was no need to stage something like this!" He winked at her and she smiled back, demurely. 

Whispering comforting words, Hannah rolled Hank onto his good side and climbed back up front. She didn't speak to me. Billy remounted his horse and for a while rode beside Hannah again. As they talked, I tried not to listen.  Growing to like, Hannah, even in such a short time, I couldn't stomach much of their minor flirtations. I watched the landscape evolve, a little greener, and the sky ahead continue to darken, while I mulled over the confusing happenings of the past few hours. 

When Billy at last agreed to ride ahead to warn Aunt Margaret that we were on our way, I ventured to speak again.
"So, who is Hank?"
"Hank? Why, don't you know?...Hank's my brother."
"I see...and, what do you think happened to him?"
"Isn't it obvious, Mr Investigator?  We were hunting the black wolf!"
"Well, no. It's not obvious."
"What d'ya mean?"
"Well, there's a few things that bother me, Hannah."
"Uh-huh, like.."
"Well, like I said, I'm no expert but wolves usually hunt in packs..."
"Uh-huh"
"...and they're not known generally to attack people..."
"Uh-huh"
"...or to attack any animal by slashing at them, like that...it just makes no sense. That wound, can only be a surface wound."
"Oh, so you're a doctor now...Forgive me, Mr Samuels, isn't it? But my only concern right now, is getting help for my brother, and... Hang on, do you mind holding the reins for me a moment?"
I smiled at her, a big broad smile, and she returned that smile, dropping her eyes down and, I thought, blushing slightly.
"Sure, no problem," I said, as I took hold of the reins. "At last, maybe I'm winning her trust," I thought, as she leaned into the back of the wagon, and...
Thwang! - was the last sound I heard.  I felt a dull, heavy, throbbing pain in my head. "Maybe she doesn't trust me, after all" was my last thought, before the world suddenly went black. 

Monday 21 May 2018

Collier's Creek: 2 – Sand and Creosote – By Ian F White


I followed her out of the saloon and round the back to a rickety looking barn, wherein she quickly proceeded to hitch-up a robust draft horse to an equally robust wagon.
As she was finishing with some buckles, I clambered up and lifted the reins, feeling the heavy tanned leather. I glanced over as she stood.
"Move over, I'm driving," she ordered.
"I thought I might—"
"Have you driven a cart before?" she interrupted, hands on hips.
"Well, not exactly; I've driven a Surrey."
"Different things entirely," she scoffed. "You know the trails round these parts?"
"Nope..."
"You know Daisy-May's peculiarities?"
"Nope..."
"Then move over, I'm driving."
I slid over the smooth wooden seat and she climbed up beside me. I handed her the reins. Taking them from me, she smiled quaintly and turned to urge Daisy-May out of the barn and into the side street between her Ma's place and the General Store.
We left the town behind and headed north at a decent pace.
I looked around at the sandy terrain, scattered with creosote bushes. The sun beat down, creating a haze on the horizon to my right. "Don't look much like ranching country to me," I commented.
She gave me a sidelong look. "So you're an authority on farming too, huh?
"Nope..."
"Well, actually you're right. This side of the creek ain't too good, but once we get over those hills yonder, you'll see a different country altogether."
I looked ahead at the low hills she pointed at. The trail we were following continued through about a mile of flat scrubland, disappeared from sight, and then reappeared winding its way up into the low hills.
We travelled in silence for a while longer. The heat started to get to me. I took out a handkerchief, removed my hat for a moment and wiped the perspiration from my brow. Hannah respectfully stifle her amusement - respectfully, but not totally. I ignored her.
"What's your interest in Aunt Margaret?" she asked.
I frowned, then realised she hadn't been there when I'd shown James's picture around. I fished it out of my pocket and held it so she could see his face.  "I'm looking for this guy—"
She interrupted me again."That's James," she said. "What's he done?"
I put the photo away, deciding to hold off my urgent questions until I'd answered hers.
"Well, his only major crime to date is failing to write home to his mother for three months."
"Are you a lawman, mister...? I never got your name..." she seemed excited at the prospect
"Samuels, Cal Samuels. No, not anymore, I'm a private investigator these days."
"Oh." The interest drained out of her.
"Where do you know James from?"
"He's working up at the mine I think," she answered, a little surprise, like I should have known. "He was at the dance last month, didn't Bonnie tell you?"
"No, she didn't," I replied with a sigh.
"Doesn't' surprise me. She and James were getting mighty familiar. Probably didn't want Ma to know."
By this time, we had reached the creek. It was almost all dried up, just a trickle of water steadily making its way south. A couple of birds flew past us, heading for a nearby skeletal tree. Hannah snapped the reins and eased Daisy-May down the gentle bank, through the creek and up the other side, in one flowing motion. I grudgingly admired her skill.
Something had been nagging me ever since Hannah made her entrance into the saloon, and it finally surfaced.
"You said something about a wolf back in town? Do you get wolves this far south? I thought it would be coyotes. And before you ask, no, I'm not an authority on animals either."
She laughed – a gorgeous trilling noise that was contagious. I joined in. I was beginning to like Miss Hannah.
"Yeah," she finally managed. "Coyote's are the norm around here, but a few of the men from the mine and ranches have seen it. It's definitely a big black wolf."
"Even though, a single wolf couldn't take down and carry off a longhorn. There must be a pack, surely? You've got to admit there are holes in this story, Hannah."
She didn't answer, so I took the opportunity to look around this side of the creek. She was correct, further up the trail I could see the beginnings of scrubby grasses and imagined a lush meadow on the other side of the hills.
As I looked back in the direction of town, I spotted a rider. It was the big man from the saloon.
"Looks like we got company," I announced, and shifted my coat so I could get better access to my hip holster.
Hannah glanced over her shoulder. "Oh, it's only Billy Clements."
"Only Billy Clements," I repeated sceptically.
She jabbed me in the ribs. "Be nice – I'm working on him."
Not quite sure what she meant by that, I complied anyway. As the other man drew closer, I called out to him. "Good afternoon, Mister Clements. Nice day for a ride."
He ignored me and drew up on Hannah's side of the cart, matching our speed.
"Whatcha doin' out here with this nosey city gent?" he growled. "Us local fellas not good enough for ya?"
"Don't be silly, Clem," she said gaily. "You're the only man for me."
"Keep it that way. And I told you before; don't call me Clem – that's a girl's name. I ain't no girl."
"No, you aint," she agreed, but the inference was lost on the big man.
He finally turned his black browed eyes on me. "An' you keep yer hands to yourself, mister city gent."
"Sure thing Clem," I responded with a smile.
Before the fury fully registered in his flushing face, Hannah's excited expletive brought both of our attentions back to the present.
"Jeez, look at all those vultures?" she called out, standing up and pointing ahead of us. "Someone's in a lot of trouble."
At least a dozen large black shapes floated lazily in the sky perhaps a half-mile ahead of us. And off in the distance, the sky was getting unnaturally darker...


Monday 14 May 2018

Collier's Creek: 1 - A Stranger in Town by Jo Cameron-Symes


Prologue – Philadelphia, May 1890 - Office of C.P. Samuels – Private Investigator

It was a sunny morning in mid-May when my life changed completely. Work was slow and I was getting restless. That was until ten o’clock, when Mr Lennox and his distraught wife entered my office.
 “It’s my son Mr Samuels; James Lennox, a Geologist. He’s been missing for three months. Headed out West for work.” He handed me a photograph of a handsome fellow, young, aged twenty-three, so he said. I studied it carefully, though it told me nothing yet.
“Sir, with all due respect, lots of young men head out West and lose contact with their folks. It’s nothing personal. The West, as we know, is a different country.” I handed the photo back. “Besides, it would be like looking for a needle in a haystack. I’m sorry Sir, I’m not sure I can help you.”
“We’ll pay double your usual fee. Make it worth your while. It’s important, my wife is desperate and may not have long to live!”
I looked across at Mrs Lennox and she did indeed look very unwell. Mrs Lennox grabbed my forearm; “Please help us! My son used to write to me every week. We’ve heard nothing for three months. Please, I implore you!” she said.
It was the desperation in her eyes that swung me. “Ok,” I said, “I will try my very best, but you know this will be difficult.” If only I’d known just how difficult it would be…


One Week Later - Collier’s Creek - Arizona

The coach rolled into town followed by a trail of golden dust. The heat was intense and the sunlight was blinding. I took the photo out of my pocket. This was the last town where James had been, according to his parents; ‘Collier’s Creek,’ Arizona. I stepped off the coach and the driver handed me my trunk.
“Not much in here, Sir.”
“I like to travel light.” I said.
The coach driver seemed nervous as if he wanted to be gone. Before I paid him, I asked him why he was so skittish.
“I don’t like to stop here at night.”
“Why?” I asked.
He looked around. “No reason,” he shrugged, but his hand shook as he took my money. He jumped back up into his seat and sped off, his horses a flurry of activity creating a mini sandstorm.
I looked around me. I was on Main Street. On the left was ‘Jensen’s Hotel,’ a huge establishment that looked out of place. Opposite was a Saloon Bar called ‘The Golden Horseshoe.’ Along from the saloon I saw: a General store, Wells Fargo Office, Sheriff’s Office, and Blacksmith’s Stables. There was little else here. I was keen to begin my investigation, so checked into Jensen’s then headed to the saloon.
I noticed a couple of old timers, sitting on chairs on the porch, staring at me from under the brims of their Stetsons. I nodded at them and smiled curtly but knew that I was unwelcome here. In this town, I was a stranger and about to cause trouble as far as they were concerned. This town was not forgiving, this town had its secrets, of that, I was sure.
I pushed open the saloon doors. The bar was almost empty aside from a few inebriated regulars. A pretty, blonde barmaid eyed me as I approached.
“What’ll it be, Mister?” she asked.
“A beer,” I said.
“New in town, huh?” she said as she poured my drink.
“Yeah,” I replied.
I then felt someone staring at me from the darkest corner of the room. I looked over and saw a huge man aged about thirty. He swigged his beer and kept on staring in a hostile manner. I took my hat off, placed it on the bar, and strolled on over to the interested party.
“Everything alright?” I asked.
“Depends.”
“On what?”
“On your purpose here, Mister. We don’t like strangers, in these, here parts.”
“Really? Well, I’m not after your girl if that’s what you’re thinking.” I looked across at the blonde who seemed quite insulted by this.
“She ain’t my girl,” the man said and stood from the table drawing up to his full height which was tall, very tall. “What’s your name Mister?” he asked.
“My name’s Calvin Samuels, but you can call me Cal,” I said. I handed him a business card hoping to distract him, he squinted at the text and I reached into my pocket and brought out the photo. “I’m here to look for this man. James Lennox, from Philadelphia. Have you seen him? He’s been missing for three months.” He peered at the photo for a while and shook his head.
“Sorry Mister. Can’t help you there.” He looked across at the blonde and slowly walked out.
I walked back over to the bar. The blonde eyed me carefully, then leant across and whispered into my ear. “You’d do right to cause no trouble here. I don’t want such a fine fella as you being barred. Who’re you looking for?” she said as she took the photo from me in one clean sweep. “He sure was, I mean, is handsome. Not as handsome as you mind.” I was about to challenge her slip, when there was an almighty gunshot outside.
We ran into Main Street to see a drunkard standing in the middle of the road, aiming a rifle high into the air. The Sheriff was approaching him, followed by his Deputy and a Preacher. “Now, now Dale, put the gun down,” the Sheriff said. “Let’s be getting you home.” The Preacher beseeched him to repent and give up the demon drink for it led to the devil. Dale looked around him, suddenly realising where he was. The Sheriff crept up to him, took the rifle away, and handed it to his much younger Deputy. The tableau was disrupted and everyone carried on as normal.
The blonde put her hand on my shoulder and leant into me. “Don’t worry ‘bout ol’ Dale,” she said. “He’s harmless, mostly…” We walked back into the bar.
“So, you’re looking for this fella? His eyes look pretty dark, hmm, eyes the colour of Bourbon…” she said, as if lost in a remembered reverie.
“Do you know him?” I asked.
“No.” I sensed that she was lying. “I think I’d remember a face like that. No, darlin’ I’ve never seen him, sorry.”
“Well, that’s a shame,” I said looking dejected.
“Hey, I said I haven’t seen him, but I might know someone who has.”
“Who?” I asked.
A harried portly woman emerged from a back room shouting “Bonnie! Have you sent that telegram yet? Your father needs that information urgently!”
“Oh, sorry Ma, I forgot.” She looked shamefaced.
“And who’s this man, Bonnie?” she barked, looking at me.
“Cal Samuels,” I replied, handing her a business card. “I’m here to look for this man,” I said handing her the photograph. “James Lennox.”
“Hmm,” she said.
“Does he look at all familiar?” I asked.
“Nope, sorry.” I looked at her face closely and believed her.
“Your daughter was just about to tell me of someone who might have seen him?” I looked across at Bonnie who was sullen and quiet now.
“Have you tried the Sheriff?” her mother asked.
“Not yet, but I intend to.”
“Good, well, I would ask him, if I were you.”
“Where do men go when they arrive in town?” I asked her.
“It depends, they wouldn’t be able to afford many nights at Jensen’s. They usually look for work at the mine. Apart from that, they work on farms, ranches and the railroad. But the mine is by far the largest employer.”
“And where do they stay?”
“A variety of places.”
“Ma?” Bonnie interrupted.
“Yes dear?”
“What about Aunt Margaret’s? That is where a lot of young fellas stay, after all.”
“Of course! Yes, you must see my sister. She lives out of town on one of the largest ranches in the county!” She wrote the details on the back of my business card.
“Yes,” Bonnie said. “Poor Aunt Margaret’s husband died, leaving her a widow at forty! She had a whole big ranch to manage all on her lonesome, so thought she better open up some rooms and get some fine, strong, young men to help her out.”
“Bonnie!” her mother rebuked. “Margaret has suffered a great loss and needs all the help she can get.”
“Of course, Mother. She needs a lot of help out at her stud farm.” She tried to suppress a giggle.
A tall girl walked in through the back of the saloon, a rifle slung over her back. She was dressed in rancher’s clothes and covered in dirt.
“My sister,” Bonnie whispered with an eyeroll.
“Hannah!” her mother scolded. “How many times have I told you not to walk all that dirt into my bar? This is a respectable establishment!” she said.
“Sorry Ma,” Hannah said, laying down the rifle behind the bar. “I’ve been looking for wolves, well, one wolf actually, a mighty big one! Hank said he saw it last night. It took a few cattle from Foster Allan’s Ranch.”
“Wolves! A likely story! Well, you can now help this here young man. He’s heading out to Aunt Margaret’s, and I want you to accompany him.”
“Mother! That’s not fair! I want to go!” sulked Bonnie.
“Absolutely not, young lady! You’ve got to deliver that message to your father. I’ll hold the fort here, now be off with you!”
Hannah looked at me crossly. “Ok, but please excuse me while I freshen up.” She seemed different from her sister. Much more serious and hard-headed. Bonnie huffed her way out of the saloon letting everyone know she felt hard done by.
While I waited for Hannah I looked down at my card and saw with a start that Margaret’s surname was Jensen. Just how many Jensens were there in this town?
“Quite a few dear.”
“Sorry, I didn’t realise I’d spoken out loud.”
She looked at me with a smirk on her face. “The Jensens don’t just own that fancy hotel. They own the mine, ranches, and farmland out to the east. They live in a huge house out yonder.” She waved in a general northerly direction.
Hannah appeared, not looking much different, though she’d washed her face and changed into a skirt, presumably to appease her Aunt.
“Ready?” she asked. “We’d better hurry, a hell of a storm’s brewing.”
“Language, Hannah!”
“Sorry, Ma,” she said.
I took my hat and followed her outside…

Sunday 6 May 2018

Eruditon or pretentiousness by Vivien Teasdale


Whilst volunteering in the library, I was given a book with the suggestion that it should be put forward for the reading group. The book was ‘How to Ruin a Queen’ by Jonathan Beckman. The reviews described it as a ‘rollicking whodunit’; ‘a terrific tale’, ‘Beckman tells this scarcely believable story with flair’.

It’s actually a history book, not fiction, relating events surrounding Marie-Antoinette and the French Court. When reading this book, you also need an extremely good dictionary to hand to be certain of fully understanding such literary ventures as:

‘His lack of resolve deliquesced into  self-destructive generosity’, or ‘the marquis’s face torqued itself incredulously’.Would you want to be described as a ‘milquetoast nonentity’?

It’s always good to stretch our vocabulary and perhaps mine isn’t as good as other people’s, but it made me think: what is the point of writing, whether it’s fiction or fact?

Firstly, I suppose we do it because we enjoy it, so perhaps Mr Beckman enjoys using extremely literary language (or perhaps he just enjoys using a thesaurus) regardless of who might be reading the book. But as Andrew said at one meeting ‘everything is for the reader, not the writer.’
Secondly, we write to communicate. For that we need to know our audience. If the audience for this book is limited to those who can read it without recourse to a dictionary, then it’s a hit, but in that case, should it be in a general public library?

If the audience was expected to be Joseph Public (slightly posher and better educated than his cousin, Joe, but not by much) then surely fewer break-teeth words would be more appropriate? Instead of ‘The peers … had recused themselves …’ why not just say they’d disqualified themselves, which is all recused means. Instead of referring to ‘the monitions of the Brunswick manifesto’, couldn’t he have just used that good old English word ‘admonitions’? It’s longer and almost as posh. Why use an archaic ‘parlously’ instead of perilously, or pusillanimous instead of timid? Why labile instead of unstable?  And if anyone really knows what he means by describing Marie Antoinette as a ‘steepling bulwark’ because she blocked the ambitions of Cardinal de Rohan, please let me know. I’m assuming he means she was confident, or possibly evil, but whether she was in the habit of steepling her fingers, I’ve no idea.

Is it a good book? I’m finding it interesting and enjoyable to read, despite the constant breaks for research.  I’m extending my vocabulary and revising quite a few words which I know but sometimes need to check and I now know what a Mansard roof is when I see one.  It’s well researched, probably factually correct, and covers a little known aspect of French history. Is it ‘good’? I think that depends on what you want from a book, whether you want simply to be entertained or to stretch your brain, which it certainly does. 

Still, I felt ever so slightly smug when I found Beckman’s own description of the book beginning ‘It explores how history is comprised of the stories told by its participants …’, for, as we all know, this is shockingly bad grammar – and from a Cambridge graduate with double first in English, too. Oh, tut, tut!