Snippets into a Shattered Life by Amy Williamson
Hi all! This is my first post here. I wasn't sure what to put initially until I remembered a few snippets I wrote during a workshop at the Literature Festival recently. The workshop focused on setting, and how setting can build the atmosphere of your scenes. This is in three parts - and gets a little dark. The front room was dark when Suzie got home. That wasn't surprising, but she was shocked to see full bottles of ale on the side table. So, Jim hadn't come home yet. If he had, those bottles would be empty. rolling on the floor abandoned. She took off her bag and set to work on dinner. Focused on chopping the vegetables, she jumped when the door suddenly shook with a loud banging. "Damnit Suzie! You better open this door!" Thomas's voice resounded through the door and filled the small home. The landlord was impatient. His fist brayed on the door, the wood creaking under his fist. "Jim drank the rent money again and ran off. You better give me someth...