Finding The One by Annabel Howarth
You will find The One when you least expect it
and you will know you have found The One almost straight away, so relax in the
knowledge that it will all work out and enjoy the experience of searching for
The One in our capable hands.
This was a
statement that Brenda used to think was true for everything, not just the
right partner or, in this case, the perfect wedding dress. Now, as she read the blurb on the flyers on
the counter in front of her, she sighed.
If only she could find The One.
The One reason why selling her beloved bridal shop was going to be a
good thing for her.
The bell to
the shop door rang and a surge of expectancy filled Brenda’s chest. She hoped Margaret didn’t hear her sigh of
disappointment when she realised it was only her.
“Hi Brenda,
I thought you might need cheering up, so I’ve bought us the biggest pieces of red
velvet cake they had in Julie’s to go
with a nice cuppa. Shall I put the
kettle on?” Margaret was beaming at her as she made her way to the back room.
Brenda sighed,
loudly and at length. So that’s what I have to look forward to, she
thought, an ever expanding waistline from
an addiction to all things sweet, encouraged by my well meaning feeder friend.
“Have you
looked at those brochures yet?” came the voice from the back room.
Brenda
looked under the counter at the untouched collection of cruise brochures
Margaret had brought in for her two days before. She pulled them up onto the counter and
quickly bent over the page corners in a bid to make them looked used, before
replacing them. “I’ve had a quick glance
through,” Brenda shouted back.
“Oh good,”
said Margaret as she walked up behind Brenda, “A good holiday is just what
we’ll need after saying goodbye to this place.”
Margaret looked intently at Brenda as she passed her the tea and
cake. “I know you’re really upset about
closing the shop, but you know, I do think it will be for the best. You and Ron, you’ll be able to spend some
quality time together when he retires at the end of the year.”
Brenda
smiled weakly. “To be honest, Margaret,
the idea of Ron being home all the time, scares me to death. I know I’ve moaned about his dedication to
his job all these years, but that’s what I’m used to. That’s what I know. What’s he going to expect when he’s there all
the time? I’m hoping he’ll take up golf or something.”
The bell to
the shop door rang again, but this time Brenda didn’t look up. She'd already decided that at 3.30 in the
afternoon, there were going to be no customers at all today. It would be a delivery and Margaret could
deal with it.
Margaret
nudged Brenda from her daze. “I’ll just
take these things into the back room, Brenda.
I think we’re going to be busy.”
The party
of five looked on the tired side. Brenda
was shocked into work mode, trying to size up who was the bride to be. Surely
not the reluctant, dejected looking one, but probably yes. These days they expect champagne. Her mother has probably dragged her in here.
Brenda fixed her most brilliant,
welcoming smile. “Can I help you, or are
you happy just brousing yourselves for now?”
“Just
brousing at the moment,” came the strained reply.
Yes, it was definitely her. Brenda watched as the three ladies, who looked as though they were in
about their late twenties, sifted through her depleted stock.
"Nanny,
nanny, here is a flower for you.”
Brenda
looked across at the little girl, with blonde curly pigtails, stood by the
coffee table in the middle of the shop.
Her grandmother was sat on one of the armchairs, and the little girl
held an artificial flower she had taken from the vase on the table.
“Thank you
so much, my darling, it’s beautiful. We
must put it back though, it isn’t ours. It
belongs to the lady,” said the grandmother pointing towards Brenda.
“It’s
okay,” said Brenda as she walked towards them.
She looks about my age, Brenda
thought. It’s heart melting watching those two together. I don’t feel ready to be a grandmother myself,
but what an adorable little thing. “How
old is she?” asked Brenda.
“How old
are you, Melody?” The little girl held
her hands together and looked down.
“She’s three. You’ve been a very
good girl today, haven’t you, Melody?
We’ve been all over the place looking for dresses for your Aunty
Izzy.” The little girl smiled and nodded. “We had an appointment first thing this
morning in a shop in Didsbury. It was
lovely. Champagne, the works, you
know. Lots of designer dresses. Izzy thought she’d seen just the dress she
wanted on the internet. What was the
make of that dress, Izzy?”
“Jenny
Packham”
“She really
had her heart set on it before we went, but you know, the style didn’t suit
her. And she feels like she’s running
out of time.”
“When is
the wedding?” asked Brenda.
“October,”
said Izzy.
“Plenty of
time, love,” said Margaret, who'd returned from the back room.
“Well, you
say that, but Sarah works shifts, and this is her only free weekend for months,
and she lives down South,” said Izzy. “We
can’t look for bridesmaid’s dresses until we’ve found my dress.”
“You are
right, love, but don’t worry. The best
thing is to try lots of different styles on and get a feel for what suits
you. You will know when you have found
The One,” said Brenda, with a reassuring smile.
Brenda
watched and made encouraging noises, as Izzy tried on different styles of ivory
organza, knowing that they were not the right dress for her. Brenda knew she had to time it just
right. She had to give her customer the
freedom to try on the dresses she thought she should try, but ensure that she
didn’t feel so despondent that she would leave the shop without trying on The
One. Brenda had earmarked it for her in
her mind almost as soon as she had walked into the shop. This was what years of experience had taught
her, not expensive designers or the internet.
At 4.15,
Izzy was looking despondent again.
“How about
trying this one?” said Brenda.
She could
see the disbelief on Izzy’s face.
“Well,
okay, I might as well,” she shrugged.
“Let me
help you,” said Brenda, and she gestured to Margaret to show the others the
bridesmaid’s dresses, as she guided Izzy to the changing room.
The oyster
coloured dress, complimented Izzy’s pale skin, where the ivory had left her
looking washed out. Brenda felt that
thrill she knew she would miss, when she heard Izzy say, “Oh, does it lace up
at the back? I always liked the idea of
that,” and “And it has buttons all the way down the back too!” Brenda felt a surge of excitement as she looked
on the surprised faces of the other ladies when Izzy came out of the changing
area, with the long train behind her, and they commented on the detail and how
relaxed and comfortable Izzy looked. Izzy’s
whole face had lit up and she was standing confidently.
“What do
you think, Mum? I think it’s the One!”
Both Brenda
and Margaret were in their element now, and by 5.15 Brenda was taking the
deposit for a wedding dress, veil, two bridesmaids dresses, one flower girl
dress and four pairs of shoes.
“Well
Margaret,” said Brenda, after she turned the “closed” sign and collapsed onto
an armchair, “If that’s the last sale we make, I will feel like we went out on
a high. Days like that are what it was
all about! Pass me those brochures, will
you? I feel like booking that holiday
now. And do you know what else I’ve been
thinking? I think maybe I should take up
golf.”
The bell to
the shop door rang. Brenda didn’t turn
around at first. She expected it would
be Ron. He usually came to meet her
after work on a Saturday. The expression
of surprise she could see on Margaret’s face, made Brenda stand up and turn
suddenly. It was Ron. But he wasn’t alone.
“Mum,” said
an apprehensive looking Chloe, “Rob and I have something to tell you. We’ve just come from the infirmary.”
“Oh, Chloe
love, is everything okay?”
“Yes, Mum,
it's good news. Well, we think so,
anyway? We’re having a baby.”
“A
baby? Wow. How far along?”
“Just 12
weeks.”
“Margaret,
is there any of that cake left? I think
I might need it now. Do you fancy
putting the kettle on? I’m too
excited. I’m going to be a grandmother
and we might need to rush through another wedding dress order!”
“Mu-um!”
Inspired by an article in the Huddersfield Examiner 12th January 2016, about the closure of a local wedding dress shop.
Inspired by an article in the Huddersfield Examiner 12th January 2016, about the closure of a local wedding dress shop.
I did like that; it hadn't occurred that the shopkeepers would know the perfect dress for clients, and the right time to suggest them!
ReplyDeleteThank you Daz39. I really appreciate your feedback.
DeleteIt teased and it pleased. "The One" - we all have our own ideas about what that means and you covered them all. Well all of mine anyway. What a lovely story; thankyou for bringing some welcome warmth to a dismal day x
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback Martin. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteBrought back memories of my wedding dress shopping.... fab story Annabel!
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