Under the Mattress by Susie Field
“You can’t put a price on a good night’s
sleep.” The salesman smiles flashing a row of gleaming white teeth. He probably uses the same phrase every time
he sells one of these expensive beds, but I suppose it’s true, and I am taking
rather a long time to make up my mind.
I know I want a double bed and I’ve chosen
the headboard in a neutral shade, in case I change the décor in my bedroom, and
I’ve eventually decided on a mattress after testing hundreds, well not that
many obviously, but quite a few. My
problem at the moment is deciding whether to have drawers at the sides or at
the bottom of the bed.
He’s beginning to lose patience. He’s trying not to but he’s looked at his
watch three times and now he’s stifling a yawn. I don’t care. It’s an important
decision, not to mention a lot of money, and I will not be rushed.
“The thing is,” he continues through gritted
teeth. “How much room do you have at the
bottom of the bed? You’ll need enough
space to open the drawers comfortably.”
“I’m not sure.”
“Well how about at the side of the bed? Both sides or just one?”
“It’s not a very big bedroom so there isn’t
a lot of room. Maybe I shouldn’t go for
a divan.”
He
sighs dramatically. “You said you wanted
storage space, madam.”
“Yes, I do really. It’s so difficult.”
It’s getting dark outside and I notice all
the other customers have left.
“Perhaps I should come back tomorrow with my
husband.” I give him my best smile but
he’s having none of it. I’ve wasted his
afternoon and he’s going to sell me a bed come what may.
“I could have the very thing. Come this way.”
I follow him to the far end of the showroom,
wishing I could make my escape.
“Here we are,” he says with a flourish. “Plenty of storage in this little beauty.”
I watch as he lifts the mattress and base to
reveal an enormous storage compartment.
“Oh yes, it looks very nice.” I hesitate and
he’s waiting. “It’s just that it may be
a little heavy for me to lift.”
He demonstrates how easy the whole procedure
is and I have a go.
“I’m not sure, I’m afraid.” My arms are already aching from the whole
procedure.
I can tell he’s holding his breath thinking
I’m inventing another excuse. I’m still
peering into the depths of the storage compartment, afraid to meet his eye, when
he pushes me hard and I fall. Feeling dazed
I turn onto my back, blood dripping from a cut on my head. He’s staring down at me. His black eyes deep
in their sockets. He smiles, exposing brown rotten teeth. The stench is
unbearable. He licks his pale lips.
The showroom is now in darkness, but I can
see the figures lurking in the shadows. They approach slowly. I cannot move. I’m trapped.
Ooh, spooky. How quickly this turned from an entertaining and amusing description of an ordinary activity, to a darkening story. I am not usually one for horror stories but would like to see more of this piece.
ReplyDeleteSusie, your writing is getting darker - just what have you been up to during lockdown? It's a great story, exactly depicting what happens when you can't quite make up your mind what to buy - except the ending I hope as I'm very much one for humming and ahing over purchases. I'll know to beware next time. xx
ReplyDeleteBeware salesmen with silver tongues and sharp teeth! A bloody good rug-pull of a story. Thank you, Susie!
ReplyDeleteWhat a plot twist!
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