Rough End of the Sponge by Owen Townend
There's a little red mark on the cooker,
days old
dried-on,
I can tell that it's yours -
a scourge of
ill-made rouge.
There's a sticky puddle running by the sink
fair tint
foul
scent,
It’s the dampest of enigmas
untouched by
tidy manners.
There's a shard of crockery on the carpet
sharp blue
stained
tip,
once upon a time a bowl
now your bloody
handiwork.
That used straw you left on the table
was the last.
This could be read in so many ways, Owen. Did he/she just leave or is there a body out there, waiting to be found? I love 'the dampest of enigmas untouched by tidy manners' line. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Vivien. This is one of my junior efforts, actually. I agree it has a mysterious quality. Surprising for uni verse. Glad you liked it.
DeleteOh I did like that Owen.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Chris!
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