Too Close to the Edge by Susie Field
The
security lights shine through the blackout curtains. Strange, this has never happened before. I climb out of bed, and pulling the curtains
aside, peer out into the inky blackness of the night. I must have been mistaken, yet everything
seemed so bright. My eyes adjust to the
darkness, and I shiver.
The
wind is whistling through the trees, and a full moon suddenly appears, casting
an eerie glow across the garden. I
silently watch and wait. What is lurking
in the dark shadows? A lonesome fox
approaches, staring straight at me, daring me to confront it, eyes bright and
piercing, but I remain still, and it swaggers on its way, soon out of
sight. The moon disappears and darkness
envelopes the garden once more.
I sigh
and close the curtains, longing to return to my welcoming bed. I gasp at the scene before me. I am asleep, buried beneath the duvet, dead
to the world. I’m looking down at myself. How can this be? I cannot explain. Is this what is known as an out of body
experience? Yet I’m very much alive, although afraid. I creep towards the bed
and climb beneath the still duvet. I
shudder and shake, my body quivering as we become one.
I’m
fully awake and lay still, shocked, and frightened. I hug the duvet close. Was it a dream? I’m not sure. I turn on the bedside light. I don’t want to be swallowed by the darkness. I must stay awake until dawn breaks. Maybe then I will be safe.
I turn
away from the window as the lights illuminate my bedroom once more. I remain perfectly still. I sense someone
close. Voices, they’re calling my
name. Their fingers scrape my window, they’re
trying to reach me. Someone is knocking on my door. I know it’s locked. Why would they want to harm me? I can hear footsteps in the hall, climbing
the stairs. The door slowly opens, but
there’s no one there.
Very eerie, Susie. This is a perfect example of the strange things we can dream yet they seem so real. Excellent. xx Vivien
ReplyDeleteIt doesn't get spookier than strange movements in bedtime dark. A wonderfully atmospheric piece. Thanks, Susie.
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